Evaluating the personality profile

1. Did the lead draw your interest to the story?
Yes. The lead has a shock factor effect that makes me want to figure out why he only has a jockstrap on.

2. What's your favorite quote and why?
My favorite quote is the closing sentence. It offers humor and ends the story on a happy note.

3. What's the angle of this feature?
I think the angle of this feature is that everyone is multifaceted. Ali Mustaq is not only a gay man or Pakistani or a teacher. He is all of that and more.

4. What's the best description in the story?
The best description is in the first three paragraphs as it helps set the scene of a place most people would be unfamiliar with. The description paints a very vivid picture of the bar and the atmosphere surrounding it.

5. How many people are quoted in the story?
Five people are quoted.

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